Good Comments: You had a fun presentation. You showed how technology evolved. I liked the way you put a video in. Suggestions: You need better and way more non pixelated pictures. try and embed the pictures.
Fun and enjoyable!! Ideas were all expressed very clearly. No punctuation, spelling or vocabulary errors and the video was really amazing!!! But, I do have a few suggestions. Lots of your pictured were badly pixilated and don't zoom in too close to the arrows as it is a bit irritating.
Good job deeban, outstanding video, though I have 1 complaint, why did you crowd your information into 1 spot, its kind of hard to read your info when we don't really know which one to read. Your graphics were wuite pixelated, and a bit of your words were unclear, but I understanded most of it and it was enjoyable to see. My rating: 6.7/10 O.K
Good Comments:
ReplyDeleteYou had a fun presentation.
You showed how technology evolved.
I liked the way you put a video in.
Suggestions:
You need better and way more non pixelated pictures.
try and embed the pictures.
Fun and enjoyable!! Ideas were all expressed very clearly. No punctuation, spelling or vocabulary errors and the video was really amazing!!! But, I do have a few suggestions. Lots of your pictured were badly pixilated and don't zoom in too close to the arrows as it is a bit irritating.
ReplyDeleteThe Good: The light blue background was a nice touch. There was a nice pattern going down and the video was cool.
ReplyDeleteThe Bad: Try and make the pictures less pixelated. The words were tightly squished together making it hard for me to read them.
Good: The background is really nice. I liked the youtube video. I like the way that was really good pictures
ReplyDeleteImprove: Pictures were pixelated. Some words can't be readable
Good job deeban, outstanding video, though I have 1 complaint, why did you crowd your information into 1 spot, its kind of hard to read your info when we don't really know which one to read. Your graphics were wuite pixelated, and a bit of your words were unclear, but I understanded most of it and it was enjoyable to see. My rating: 6.7/10 O.K
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